If you were a melody
I would only use the 'good' notes
Starting slow and low
Cause you keep it cool
Speeding up a bit
For the times you catch an attitude
Tinkling the high La, Ti, Do's
When we're together
And I'm dropping hot kisses all over
Running my fingers over all the keys
A symphony of tunes
That's when you're laughing with me
Starting back with the notes
Rich with treble and bass
For the velvet of your voice when you snore
A complicated melody you are
Yet, you have have helped me compose
the music of my heart...
A contest entry
- Music by mrdurflinger.
700 points, ended November 24, 2008, 6 entries
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...And you are the melody of my soul
strumming my emotion's chords with elegant fingers
how I love the sound of your heart's song...
Your writing is as intensely beautiful as you....♥
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Nicely done. Love has always been the backbone of music.
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If you were the song I whistle
my throat would be dry and my lips numb
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Nice mixture
This is a nice mixture of music and romance. Hidden in each line is an undertone that is sexy.
I liked this very much.
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gosh..
cre8tiv, that's what she is, elated that's what i feel..you write such amazingly crafted poetry,
to the stars and beyond is where your limits are found to be.
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Beautiful
Baby every time I read your words
I fall in love with them all over
again. You're an enchanting enigma.
Someone I yearn to know and be with.
I truly enjoyed this symphonic symphony
of melodious rapture. A heavenly piece
that struck all the right cords.
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