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My Angel

There is an angel I know
sitting beside me
as I go,

He won't let me down,
He won't turn me away,
He seems to be here to stay.

He whispers in my ear,
comforts me when I am scared,
He gently guides me through
when I don't know where to turn.

I feel his hand gently pushing
me forward,
helping me as I go.

I feel his love,
holding me close to him,
when times are hard.

He won't let me down,
never has, and never will,
This angel of mine.




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  • Candy6
    December 1, 2008
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    Great written poem


  • Amera gold member
    November 24, 2008

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    How true and how do I know this? I have an angel by the same name sitting right next to yours who keeps him in line.

    Love,
    Amera♥


  • Melody in the Embers
    November 22, 2008

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    This is so amazing and precious! I love it! Please keep writing.


  • stavykm gold member
    November 21, 2008

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    Beautiful

    This Angel of Mine.

    He won't let me down,
    never has, and never will,
    This angel of mine.

    Oh I must have a angel too...I'm still around which is a miracle. Oh this was just beautiful to read. I loved it and it was so sof and gentle with imagery and spiritual emotions. Thank you for sharing with me my dear sweet friend. I've missed you!!

    Wishing You Many Blessings
    Much Love
    Kelle Marie


  • victorbuhagiar
    November 21, 2008

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    *****

    A unique poem. I suppose in this materialistic world, very few think about their angel. This reminded me I have one too. It also reminded me of what such an angel can do. Had I written this I would have included some nature scenes. But this does not detract anything of this poem. Well done. victorbuhagiar


  • Desire gold member
    November 21, 2008

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    Precious~

    Aaaaaaaaaw this is a Beauty of a piece You have penned What You have spoken of- good attributes I say
    Woot!!
    The last line reminds me of a song
    Excellent!! Love this~
    Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet One
    Best wishes too
    with much love & light~ Desire~*~


  • storiesuntold gold member
    November 21, 2008
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    Oh I hit it again

    And it is just as magnificent as before keep up the good work honey


  • storiesuntold gold member
    November 21, 2008
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    Beautiful write here

    Oh so blessed are those who feels the guidance through love Bravo on this write honey

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