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To Capture A Rainbow

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Have you ever witnessed a rainbow ,
captured in winters hands.
How unseen through a snowflake,
untill it lands .

A vision not seen by many ,
yet its always been there .
And those who have found that child inside,
those rrainbows forever shared.

Now as we grow and learn through life the truth,
rainbows are the ribbons brought to life by me and you.
Times of love and childish ways,
often as we grow older at times become freid.

But as we move on being children as we are the of the Lord,
and we help others in time we find its not hard .
To recapture those rainbows through our children today,
for a child shows love in the purest way.

So fear not of our past make today a new,
and follow your heart and give this love so inside of you.
Bring laughter to your world and in time you shall see ,
the brilliance of the rainbows brought forth by you and me.

Author notes

God bless everyone and I pray many will look to today and not let yesterdays cloud the way for the rainbows are there for all of us if we would only see and reach out to those who loves us and exchange this love indeed.
pic by http://samuraidane.wordpress.com/category/zao-onsen/

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  • aboomer silver member
    November 28, 2008
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    Lovely! I really like your wording, images and emotions in this. And great message, too - to stay in the present and enjoy the gifts of life while we can, instead of living in the storm clouds of the past.

    I really like your first two lines on this - wonderful image!

    Thank you for the lovely entry
    best wishes in the contest


  • Puppydog gold member
    November 21, 2008

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    BEAUTIFUL!!!!

    There is indeed a rainbow in each and every day! One only has to keep an open heart and mind to see it.'s

  • Topnotchsy
    November 21, 2008

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    Beautiful poem (as always) and a nice take on the prompt. It's an important message that you write about, and one that gives hope and comfort for a better tomorrow. Best of luck in the contest with this piece.


  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    November 21, 2008
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    lovely picture fits well with your beautiful words,
    reminds last week while sitting on my patio early morning on top of the lawn was white frost with shimmery colors it was breath taking, unfortunitly,
    it melted.
    cloudy day do pass, but love is everlasting and needed by all
    well done my friend
    God bless you...


  • StarEyes
    November 21, 2008

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    What a beautiful read this one is! Sometimes, those rainbows can bring such fun and comfort. I really enjoyed this one this morning.

    Best of luck in this contest!

    and love

    Nyetta


  • Susan John Francis
    November 21, 2008
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    nice words here....awesoe

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