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snow sparrow

a tiny brown sparrow sings to all
the snow a carpet for his home
evergreens scent the wintry air
his song may sorrow lonely souls

graceful flights escape this world
chilling winds blow endlessly
optimism glows anew this year

abide with me this snowy eve


he must ever warm your heart

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  • Violinstrings silver member
    January 12
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    great language

    good words to decribe
    interesting this snowy eye
    evergreen scents the wintry air


  • artis
    December 10, 2008
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    I do so love the tiny birds that remain to struggle through the bitter times, they are like poets leaving tracks on the blank white, that can lead us all to inspiration,,,excellent write~~~Artis


  • penman gold member
    November 29, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very creative and so well expressed. Best of luck in the contest.


  • apropos
    November 21, 2008
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    beautiful! good luck in the contest!


  • White Tiger 96
    November 21, 2008

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    Wonderful Job!!! Wow, this is going to be a hard contest to judge! Thank-you so much for the lovely entry!!

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