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Love Will keep You Together

Love will bend never break
No matter how much punishment it takes
Devastation of the catastrophic kind
Almost totally losing your ever loving mind
Love will bring you back to reality
Even if broken momentarily by duplicity
Bending never breaking

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Word Prompt: Bend

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  • Ellis gold member
    December 6, 2008
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    Beautiful poem, Jo-Ann.


    • smonte19124 gold member
      December 6, 2008
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      Thank you my friend as Pamela below said if only this was true. God Bless, Jo-Ann


    • smonte19124 gold member
      December 6, 2008
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      Thank you my friend. God Bless, Jo-Ann


  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    November 28, 2008

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    If only this were the case. Lovely verse. I do wish love - no matter what - could fix everything. But sometimes, it just isn't enough.

    Thank you for such an uplifting and thoughtful poem. Beautiful to the prompt. Best of luck. ~Pamela


    • smonte19124 gold member
      December 6, 2008

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      Thank you so very much for taking the time to comment. God Bless, Jo-Ann

  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    November 28, 2008
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    If only this were the case. Lovely verse. I do wish love - no matter what - could fix everything. But sometimes, it just isn't enough.

    Thank you for such an uplifting and thoughtful poem. Beautiful to the prompt. Best of luck. ~Pamela


  • ears2hearyou gold member
    November 21, 2008

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    Wisely written....for many speak of broken hearts,
    and this makes you wonder..perhaps, it is the strong
    back....as love requires that bend and flexibility,
    a good dose of courage and strength too!
    well done poetess!
    I adore you poetry, always a pearl for us to enjoy!

    • smonte19124 gold member
      November 22, 2008
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      LOL Thank you so very much my friend I have to admit I adore your comments. I am always glad when you stop by dropping comments as if pearls of wisdom. That builds the esteem up tremendously. Thank you and God Bless, Jo-Ann


  • 2lullabyhaven
    November 21, 2008

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    I so love what you were able to do with this prompt, hahaha I wrote for it too but it pales in comparison to yours...good luck to you in the contestlol

    • smonte19124 gold member
      November 21, 2008
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      You are to modest for you are a great writer and after reading your poem you have nothing to worry about. LOL Thank you for reading and commenting. God Bless, Jo-Ann

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