I am not steel
nor am I candle wax
flowing from the heat of fire.
I am more like bronze
burnished under the sun.
Form me with love
and I will always be
strong enough
bending to reflect your beauty.
In a list
A contest entry
- Bend by Pamela A Lamppa.
1050 points, ended November 28, 2008, 14 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Wow!
Oh My what Love can do and the Power of this Gift
Beautiful piece my Friend and You took this prompt to another level~
Bravo- Excellent!
The word: burnished
so grabs for some reason~
Keep that quill dancing Jeff
Congratulations on Your Trophy win!
-Throws confetti-
Woooooooooo Hoooooooooooo
Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
Best wishes too
with much love & light~ Desire~*~
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Excellent.
Form me with love and I will always be strong enough...
The power of love truly speaks its voice in these words. Simply lovely. Excellent entry for this contest. Thank you so much. This is quite beautiful. ~Pamela
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Pam Thank you so much! just a good word form you is always plenty
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this is golden my friend, lol, not jut bronze, a great work of art, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
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This was a wonderful metaphor that interpreted the prompt to perfection. I wish I had thought of it myself. Burnished bronze is beautiful and so evocative of the warmth of love. May I suggest a comma after "enough"? Good luck in this contest. Peace, Liz
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