Quiet now
give a listen
see the sound
that tumbles through the air
Sparkling sharps
that chill you
to the bone
filled with shades of blue
Simmering flats
that fan the flame
within your aching heart
wrapped in shades of red
Staccato sounds that
make you dance
long into the night
colored now in shades of yellow
The song goes on
our delicate senses
join the dance
what a sight to see the sound.
In a list
A contest entry
- Music by mrdurflinger.
700 points, ended November 24, 2008, 6 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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A beautiful piece. You hit the right note on this one. To hear music you must see the colors and feel the tone in your soul as if it were lulling every sense in your body.
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Ooooooh~
This is a Beautiful piece and Love the images that danced in my Mind
Wonderful weaving of words
in color as always~
I missed coming to Your front porch~
elated to be here once again
Keep that quill dancing
What a sight to see...
Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
Best wishes in the contest too
with much love & light~ Desire~*~
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Full of description
I like this and found the flow as easy to follow as the song.
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Breathtaking
I have entered this contest as well, but your piece is phenomenal! I love how you played color into the piece along with the music. Beautiful. Best of luck love! ~mandie~
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