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Compromise. (Hay(na)ku)

Bend
You'll prevent
Your romance's end

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Prompt.Bend.

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  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    November 23, 2008
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    Nice Haynaku, however, word count comes in to play with this contest. 40 words. No more, no less.
    I am more than willing to wait if you would like to make change here, perhaps keep this apart from the contest and write new for this one.

    As far as bend goes - You really nailed the prompt! I loved it. So if you leave it in the contest, know it cannot win but it is perfectly done!