The deepness within emotion,
what a stupid thing to say.
that wording isn't correct,
for what you wish to display
is it a lack of emotion?
or too much of just one?
think about what you said
then call me when your done.
your opinion isn't clear
for how this statements meant
the explination that you gave
doesn't match the implication sent
Author notes
.... i hate yopu
about an ex bf
Please tell me what you think
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AMAZING!!
AMAZING POETRY!! BEAUTIFLY WRITTIN!! PLEASE READ SOME OF MY POETRY I WOULD LIKE TO GET SOMEONE AS GOOD AS YOU TO LIKE MY POETRY!!
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wow its really good. it flows nicely and i felt the emotion when reading it. well done!
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Fantastic!
You really get your emotion across through your words. I love how you have rhymed this and made it flow so well. Excellent work this is a very powerful piece
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very good write! i love this emotion and the hatred in this! very good!
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A angry and sad write. Hope all is ok with you? Love you 
xxxxx 
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thaks alot for the comment....
i rote that quite some time ago, about a guy i was seeing, who reallyu hurt me. it turned out he was bagging me behind my back. and one of the things he said (coz all his friends would tell me, coz they thought it was wrong for him to be that two faced) was that im not emotionally deep enough... and still to this day i don't undersand what eh ment by that.
i had that poem writting, but i thought it needed more ot it, but last night i read it ad thought, no i'll post it how it is.
but thanks AP mum, luv you!!!
i'm really good
i have a new boy =] and this ones alot better hehe
xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoox
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