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Symphony in stillness

Whence starts the day with warming rays my eyes have surely found
a symphony of life profound within the hush of dew kissed ground.





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  • Sonja
    November 22, 2008

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    Nature, nature and love, perfectly goes together. This is a perfect couplet.
    Spread your arms and kiss the life... hm... it just dropped to my mind.
    ~Sonja~