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great write x
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This is beautiful!! The rhyming is great and it really helps carry the poem (the background is also a nice added touch.) Reading your page you claim you are "not a serious poet" whatever that means, but I really like this piece!


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welcome to allpoetry
This poem is vibrant, makes me feel free. Very nice imagery, love the sweet touch of the ending. Great write.
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Shawna
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