Freckles that decorate my skin are but mere badges of courage for the days I choose to step out and face the light.
Bluewho
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Katrina
A contest entry
- 1/3 Round Contest by Never.Give.Up.
400 points, ended December 3, 2008, 44 entries
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Nice, cause it is only the sun that will bringthem out of hiding from beneath the surface of the skin.
Makes for a nice analogy with in an analogy.
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cool! a face without freckles is like a night without stars.
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love love it! being a freckle gal i have tremendous appreciation for this...dig the images it stirs and combines...kinda like freckles personified and solidified -how do you spell solidified lol- well done! you rock! GOOD LUCK
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Great job with this. It would be nice if everyone thought like you do. Most folks can't stand theirs. Good luck...
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