Bringing nights long and dark,
the winter wind blows the chilly air.
Crystaline patterns on cold window panes sparkle like diamond snowflakes.
Everything frozen in time for a moment.
The ground shines as if covered in diamonds.
The trees sway in the Winter with snow, ice, and wind.
Author notes
Ryan79
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diamond snowflakes
A contest entry
- underground. (LOTS OF OPTIONS!) by brandy..
550 points, ended December 12, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Astounding.
I re-read: Diamond Snowflakes
Here's a second review. I loved it. You are an excellent writer. And I...am no one. I am nothing.
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This is beautiful
Of course it's beautiful if it's coming from your beautiful heart.
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oops! i forgot these =]]
i sorry. here yous go!
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that is beautiful ryan!
good job keep it up babe!
~love sundry
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omgosh. this is beautiful.
the flow was great... and your imagery was stunning! wow, thats all i can say. awesome write. keep penning
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love it
good job
its so..
gah
just love it -
This is so pretty.... It paints that picture in the mind, only better. It is better than anything one could ever see because it is done by words, not acting, or music. Words. That is brilliant in and of itself.
Great job!
=)
Gwen
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Thanks so much for the wonderful comment. I was looking out the window and thinking and watching the storm pass and looking at snowy pictures and it kind of came together.
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Your welcome buddy!
I really do like it though, it is pretty. Makes me wish it was snowing here...
=)
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i really liked this poem ryan. i hope you do well in the contest. Good Luck!!
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