I dreamt of you on a starlit breeze
your fiery flames my rudder of promise,
swinging to and fro upon crescent moon
I watched you fly into eternity's frame.
In complete control of a dreamlit night
you turned your head capturing me within your sphere,
together we crossed horizons for two
the beacon of your love guiding us to everlasting visions.
Entwined within this sweet illusion
we manouevred forever into our own fashion,
a sculpture of one patterned across ebony skies
then hidden beneath universal form.
'Twas a dream of truth that still abides
for we are the stars that guide passions curves,
colouring a vista in hues dynamic
as we dominate this place with a craving intensity.
Author notes
11. Dreamers learn to steer by the stars (Rush)
In a list
A contest entry
- Lines from Songs 25 PROMPT Contest by Paloszoo.
700 points, ended November 30, 2008, 12 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This is just beautiful. I love the imagery and metaphors throughout. Well done! Thanks so much for taking the time to enter my contest. I’m honored to have you show your work here.
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you should really sudmit your poetry in some contest i bet you could win them all ^.^ well almost all of um it depends if i eneter muhahahaha lol j/k youd beat me anyday
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You always come up with lines that just rock my socks, seriously you need to be a spotlighted poet. I am always left feeling inadequate in your words. I shake my head and wonder how you do it. Another superb piece of talent. Best to you in the contest fine poetess
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'your fiery flames my rudder of promise,'
lovely.
This poem had the intensity and delicacy of a sonnet. Such beautiful imagery throughout
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wow that's an awsome write
this is something people want to read
well me anyways
now all i need is for school to go for christmas break and i'm gonna have to read all your poems from the first to last hm wonder how many you got oh well i'll manage i hope
just hope i don't run out of points
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Gay
Another fine write that makes the reader smile. And off to find my brighter star. Thanks to you dear poet.
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