maybe if you didn't always keep your own counsel, i wouldn't feel the need to bury your silence with my non-sensical words...
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One phrase in this sentence really stands out.
"bury your silence"
that evokes some pretty disturbing thoughts,
but then you lighten it up with "nonsensical" words.
It's like being buried in helium balloons or cotton candy. Buried, but not with enough weight to actually hold you down.
Wonderful image.
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Man, only if everyone thought that way, life would be so much easier for me right now!
Thank you!
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