A rose by any other name
would still smell sweetly just the same.
Yet the sound of your name, my dear,
means so much, I must say sincere,
you are the one, whom I revere,
now that your special time is near.
It is your birthday, soon I hear,
I wish you well for all next year.
Author notes
Photo by me.
A contest entry
- Elegancahew - New form Contest by Rebekah-Ann.
900 points, ended December 8, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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A rose
You are such a gentle poet. You have commented kindly on my work. Your words are beautiful.
Yorkshire Bard
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Bravo! You mastered the form! Thank you so much for this lovely "pick me up"! I didn't expect a happy poem for my late-husbands birthday memorial. Yet I enjoyed this!
Thank you!
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Thank you
Thanks for the HM and the time you have spent on this contest. I hope others will try this new form.
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Awwww....this was really sweet and that too in a new form! Quite amazing!
Best of luck in the contest!
Pen on!
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