Listen to me as I play your song through
Minors of heartache, through majors of
Love. Every string I pluck, every note I
Play is meant to show you what I want,
What I cannot say.
Sing with me as I play your tune out in
Soft and sweet chords, and sadness
Without. Every beat of your heart, In
Sync with the song while we hear the
Rich tones, with feelings so strong.
And when we reach the end, let me
Play your lullaby. Each note, black or
White, is like saying goodbye. Each
Key brings tears, each tear, a memory
Always remembered, always a story.
A lullaby that echoes the melody of
My promise to you.
A contest entry
- Music by mrdurflinger.
700 points, ended November 24, 2008, 6 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think?
Comments
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this poem is absolutely amazing!!!!
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AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!Beautifully written. I love it!!
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aww. wow this is so beautiful! i love that you've included music in this piece, its like a song. was it meant to be a song? anyhoo... this piece is really sweet and gentle
keep penning 
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good job great flow. nice write
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This is an amazing piece! I love it from the beginning to the end!
Good Luck in the contest! -
I think that every song written has been from a memory.
Each Key brings tears, each tear, a memory
Always remembered, always a story.
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Cool write
There is some deeper meaning that I sense in this work. very nicely written
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Beautifully Composed
I found this to be so smooth flowing and loving all at the same time. The rhythm was flawless and I am in awe at the whole piece. Fantastic write. Best of luck to you. ~
mandie~
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