political desires
within the halls of congress
blocked today’s progress
Author notes
This "Western" Haiku was inspired by our Congress's deadlocks and roadblocks that happen all too often! The auto companies bailout is a prime example!
The Current New title of this Haiku is "desires Haiku" -- I changed it because someone had already used "discord" and AP has not caught up with is change in the title!
Picture of the Congress building is from Wikipedia.
A contest entry
- Pick a word - Write a Poem in 10 LINES or less (D) by The Fun House.
1050 points, ended November 28, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Ever see an owl on a hunt?
Comments
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Great stuff!!!
Less is more...
Profound point made in so few words...
Well done!!!
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wonderful
short sweet and simple stright to the point, and no i ve never seen an owl on a hunt, have you?
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Woot! Now this is one powerfully done statement and a very nicely done Haiku. Give yourself a round of applause.
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Amazing what can be put into the short form of haiku. Well done poet, well done indeed.
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thumbs up
good take
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