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disgruntled light

I've symptoms as to die in nine months
suddenly with downwardness,
to drop doesn't seal celebrate

handle with care brazil nuts…
half twirl when my smocked skirt's caught on trampoline,
I don't know how to get off and not lose dance
to  be bare as vein
say this before carotid versus Carolyn did
I can't even sing of baby;
hid shouldn't but of family with heavenly father function
give and take of language
no tease of chapter
teacher could, learn equation

daughter announced ladybug
was on my hair like button earring
they call it polka dot, I splotched

quickly like a bee
phone nose
tilt let's do it again
go over to his ear
birds hammer notes
may I not be on side but in Paradise
I can't recover by nature breathing ripeness penning young now

Author notes

told daughter bird's scalloped as curtain opened to see one or closed carefully as pet, by creature that could be as Cloud still thought of without brightness until both see it...

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  • Just a poet gold member
    December 5, 2008
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    Very abstract interpretation of the theme

    Thank-you for the entry

    JaP