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Dreamed

soft fluffy clouds in the land of dreamy time
big colored swirly lolliepops and icecream
soft warm teddy bears and dollies to spare
muffled voices as the sweeter things fade

no i want them to come back
why do they go now? why cant they stay?
eyes fluttering open to the morning light and singing of birds
sitting up with a sigh

Bugger!
it was all dreamed

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child like fantasies in the land of nappy boo

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  • this made me hungry! thank you for entering it into the contest for jordyn and i wish you the very best of luck. viyanna rosemarie


  • The Fun House silver member
    November 21, 2008
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    forgot to clap

  • The Fun House silver member
    November 21, 2008

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    I feel the cotton candy dreams flowing through this one. I think all dreams stay with us in a sense; but then again do we know enough to keep them tightly? Nice job here