Feel the buzz
Feel the energy
Feel the restless undeniable fact your having a sugar rush
Why did you drink that jug of red cordial?
Why did you eat that triple chocolate cake?
Why are all the cookies missing from the cookie jar?
and...
Why are you jumping off the walls?
No more hyper charging sugar for YOU!
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Sugar rush!
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Oh jeez, how many bars of chocolate does it take to make me jump off the walls?!
I liked this was, it was refreshingly different to the rest.
And ofcourse, the talk of sugar is a great write anyday
Thanks for entering and best of luck
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Haha. Reminds me so much of all my friends! Immediate sugar rush...walls have dents....all my freaking candy gone! lol. thanks for the entry!
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lol, lovely lil poem
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lol but but but the buzz is so much FUN
not bad short and cute i like it.
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very very very very very very good Dani!!! I love having sugar rushes, except at the end. The thing that usually sets off my sugar rushes is Mountain Dew Voltage. IT TASTES LIKE GUMMY WORMS!!! YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!! GOOD WRITE, LOVE IT. Now to go get a certain drink. =3
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I guess there are some who are sugar addics . but they will have to make their own choices . Thank you for the reminder.
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...i love it, i am a suger addict my self and know the joys and sorrows of a surger rush al to well. this is a great write from a better writer
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Thank you for entering my contest. This is so true, sugar can do this to some people, but I prefer caffiene even more.
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lol reminds me of myself with energy drinks....thank you so much for entering my contest and best of luck!
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Haha Nice Danzy I ask my self the say things! But i just cant stop! ;p -
Hahahaha if you insist hahaha thanks for your hyped up entry
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Cute!
I, too am a sugar freak! Good luck in the contest!
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LOL! I’ve had days where I did ask myself just such questions. A truly great take on the prompt you’ve chosen and well worth the read. Pat yourself on the back. This is just too darn cute!
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Yeah!
I'm a sugar junkie. I've had to change my diet because of my problems with sugars. It brought a smile to my face. Thanks for the share, Danzy.
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