Love me tender,
Screw that!
Run away with me.
I need you, I crave you.
I saw you in my dreams.
Lets run and sing!
This love it's breaking me open and making me real.
Don't go running without me dove.
Hope you don't mind,
I'm continuing these mind games that we've been playing forever.
I want you
To Guess..
How long
I've dreamt
Of you.
How long
I have waited
For you to be all mine.
I'm praying, which I hardly do.
That you understand me and what I'm saying.
You make me crazy.
my sweet sweet love, you drive me crazy with lust!!
Forever, you are mine...
My tender loving dove.
Author notes
Random, no rhyme.. to the best of my abilities.. but its about love.. how crazy it makes you, left right up down who cares who knows.
I know I have the best love of this town 
<3 <3
A contest entry
- I just feel crazy Babes! by Lady Michaella.
400 points, ended December 2, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Well it's definitely true picture of scatterbrained love, that's for sure. Glad to see that someone can let go of tradition and just get nuts about their love. However, I may have to disagree with the last bit of your ANs. (grin)
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now, this really perfectly fits the criteria. So a big well done 2 u!!
And although i hate this type of writing (including my own poems lol) this stands out, shows what lvoe does to people. well done
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i like this. it's cute. crazy hyper words and everything. it's sweet. good luck.
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It's amazing how well you express your feelings here, i love the craziness and yet the deep passion and emotion that resides in this piece! i agree with you, love makes you crazy! well done on a fantastic, refreshing write. stay strong, it's great to see!
- Sweet Blue Eyes xx
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hmm
you know what, i must say thanks for the contest.. I actually loved writing this
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