She was stunning in her evening gown of gold
Everyone stared into her starry eyes
All the men looked at her, They were sold
Her skin perfect in everyway; everyone hypnotized
She walked along and grabbed a drink
Crossing her legs relentlessly and pursed her lips
All the hearts of the young men started to sink
She was Charming all the way to her finger tips
A man just as handsome gave her a kiss, he was charming
She had met her match,her equal,Unknowingly alarmed
Author notes
Becharm!
A contest entry
- Pick a word - Write a poem in 10 lines or less (B) by The Fun House.
1050 points, ended December 14, 2008, 19 entries
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Comments
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so smooth flowing I loved it.
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This has a little bit of sass and I like that. The imagery is well done and you can see the fairy tale (or not so much) going on in this piece. Love is scary, be it good or bad. Read aloud this flows very well.
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this sounds like a cinderella story,, sweet and loving, with a mystery on it...
WOMANIZER,
antonio
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