Awash in the gloom of darkness and death.
Drowning in tears; soaking in misery until my flesh fades and my heart rages.
Soul chained to self imposed prison beyond my control.
Body ached with a desperate refusal of acceptance and pleasure.
Mind entrapped within...
Strength required
Life continues as I watch from a comfortable distance; while what still lives slowly implodes leaving a mess only deterimination and strength will conquer.
Health regained
Pulling no punches; fighting for breath, realizing life.
Ready for battle.
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well done! thanks for sharing
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oops! i forgot my aplaud!! sorry!
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I can feel the emotion and the fight to emerge once again. strong words with deep meaning. keep writing because you are good.
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powerful
I feel every emotion, and see the beginnings of a stronger you beginning to reemerge from the depths. Welcome back my friend, you were sorely missed!
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Pulling no punches; fighting for breath, realizing life.
Ready for battle.
it is the ending that got me, i like this but it seems kind of weird to me, keep it flowing -
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This is a kind of description of the 'stages' I went/going through the last two years since my husbands death.
I haven't been writing in a poetic form for quite a while so it will take me a minutet to get in the flow of things.LOL.
T.Y.! Hugz
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