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Arizona

This place has no love for me
This heat constantly
beating me down

This place has no love for me
People in their red corvets
Just smile and wave
I know they're fake

This place has no love for me
If my car is ugly
they trow it out

This place has no love for me
every house happens to be Spanish Brown

This place has no love for me
We must all be a perfect face

This place has no love for me
Do you see a loner around?

This place has no love for me
My family back in town
1400 miles away

This place has no love for me
Arizona the perfect oasis
except when no ones around

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  • NeSsA.69.
    November 21, 2008
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    Nice.

    Is this about you?
    -It has a nice flow to it.