Time captured for a moment
I hear the rain
No need to respond
A photograph in mind
A feeling in heart
Oh send me there
To that place
Where souls meet
And hearts collide
Let the rain fall
It will not hurt
This place is deep
Within a soul
A contest entry
- Photograph.... by kiwigirljacks.
700 points, ended December 1, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Just Beautiful
I loved this poem. Yes oh send me there to that place so deep within where souls meet and hearts collide. Let the rain fall. What beautiful imagery and I loved the emotions and flow of your poem here. Thank you for sharing with me.
Merry Christmas & Have A Happy New Year
Wishing You Many Blessings,
Much Love
Kelle Marie
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Thank you Kelle Marie for the compliments on my poem. Where the life part of life resides. A baring of the soul. Don.
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Your welcome Don it is always my pleasure to read poetry about one's soul. Just beautiful you are. Love, Kelle.
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Very toughing piece. Love the way you have imaged your write. The tenderness embedded in the lines shines through. Great emotional write!
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Thank you Rachel for the compliments on my poem. Happy to hear you enjoyed it. Don
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Photographs can indeed prompt feelings can't they! Touching places deep within us! Lovely write.
(L4 'photogagh' should be 'photograph')
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Thank you for the compliments on my poem Jacks. Hope you enjoyed it. Don
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Wow~
Beauty of a write Don and Love the images You have shown through Your words
The last two lines touch deep:
This place is deep
Within a soul
Love it!!
Happy to see that quill dancing my Friend
Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet One
Best wishes in the contest too
with much love & light~ Desire~*~
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Always a pleasure hearing from you Desire. Thank you for the wonderful compliments on my poem. Happy to hear you enjoyed it. Don
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So Lovely
You have penned a lovely poem of love deep in the soul. It is a wonderful feeling you have described in your imagery. Tender and loving. I can so relate to your words. Thank you for sharing. This was a delight to read. Take care, Sandy
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Thank you Sandy for the compliments on my poem. So happy you enjoyed it. Don
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A beautiful take on the prompt. Deep emotion within your lovely words. Best to you in the contest.
Sam
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Thank you for the compliments on my poem. Happy you enjoyed it. Don
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My Dear Brother,
This one hits a bit close to home. What a great read this one is! Just amazing how so many are able to write what I am feeling! you did a great job on this one!
Best of luck in this contest!
and love
Nyetta
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Thank you Nyetta for the compliments on my poem. Hope it touches you in a special way. Don
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Beautifully Poignant...
Thank you for sharing your soulful poem with us. I agree with what Rose Angel had to say, below. 
Wishing you the best of luck in the contest!! Peace always, Cyn 
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Thank you Cyn for the compliments on my poem. Always a pleasure hearing from you. Don
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You have captured images and emotions that are unique, and very moving....Captured, enraptured....in time!
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Thank you for the compliments on my poem. Happy to hear you enjoyed it. Don
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