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Journey's Wake

Thirteen came to the fold to stay
deciding goals they had to make
two left on journey of their take
to make haste in their own thought’s way.

Deciding goals they had to make
the eleven that now remained
their hearts set on the year's contain 
with group dynamics in their wake.

Two left on journey of their take
a piece of heart from each of us
steadfast together on their bus
the rest made way without a break.

To make haste in their own thought’s way
they learnt to play the group’s own game
advanced through theory which they tamed
becoming skilled as they all played.

Author notes

Morning of 21 November 2008:

My postgraduates will end their year's academic journey today.  They have been with me for the past year. Each Friday we met for the full day to learn and sometimes have fun. We will have a 'Year-end functioning' this evening for the 'Class of 2008'. Should you want to drop a message - I would appreciate this, and assure they receive these. They were a wonderful bunch a hard-working students - I will miss each of them in the same way as when one's children 'fly from the nest'.

22 November 2008:

We had a wonderful evening together, with much thought that each will be going their way.  This has been a year to remember and to cherish in our hearts for the years to come.  During a year such as this, we get to know the depth of character, the sadness and also the humours.  I introduce something of each to you of the wonderful eleven who journeyed with me:

 

Roger, the happy loud mouth of the class,

can take you on a journey of words

so beautifully that one forgives the noise!


Ludwe
, our priest in arms; first ventured

as if we would have to settle down to pray,

but emerged into a great facilitator.


Laverne
, the one that developed with might,

each Friday contact in her own right -

she'll be an asset to the NMMU Business School.


Deanne
for others, and Dee to us -

ths short and sweet lady so young

brought us a blessing like none.


Lesley
the teacher, wanting so badly

an academic to be; she has whit

and drive tackling life others would admire.


Nicky
, the one we can trust and enjoy -

a heart of gold and drive for a win;

her zest - like leaps and bounds.


Monwabisi
, with capabilities

to foster growth in others;

he has grown like an only son.


Sekere
, the pied-pipers dream!

Taking us in with that wonderful smile;

his niche will be his future next year.


Steven
, with solid supportive style,

a wonderful trustworthy one -

a silent leader that nutures us all.


Pamela
our RPL and PoE,

has all the competencies to show

how things can be done in the industry!


and then, Hhlekani

Hhlekani's the one who sees a smile in things,

even when experiencing stressful times -

a heart for those who are in difficult times.

To you my students of 2008
with pride I introduce you
through AP to the world
those that will read this
will truly know
that you have crept
right into my heart. 

We could aim to continue
our contact next year,
but we should think of it
in this ‘interdependent’ way
that it would be selfish
if we hold
back

on our gains in the spaces

where we ought to tread. 


A blessing to each of you.

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  • Lady Ireland gold member
    November 22, 2008

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    Farewell my students!

    Frans,
    it must be hard for you as teacher to say too many goodbyes. each year you have to go through this sad process. i am sure you had a joy in teaching them and they in you. to them i would like to say....

    Dear students,
    go safe with they knowledge you have recieved and know that you should be proud of the pride that frans has in you! i have no doubt that he has taught you much. God bless you all on the future journeys you take and i pray that god goes with you.

    Dolores
    xx


  • Moonlightdragon gold member
    November 21, 2008

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    Congratulations for the class of 2008
    Finely penned for the time spent
    I can not help but wonder what you have learned
    For to teach is to continue to learn.

    Best regards,
    Robert


  • CitrineSunrise silver member
    November 21, 2008
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    As a teacher I can relate to the sense of purpose, accomplishment and wistfulness that happens as the school year ends. With a group as intimate as this you can learn each other's strengths and weaknesses, giving special attention to those areas most in need. Your students were fortunate to have such a caring mentor. and I wish them joy as they settle into their new careers. Peace, Liz


  • penman gold member
    November 21, 2008
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    Excellent

    What a terrific write. And so very well done. Thank you so much for sharing.


  • Sandygram
    November 21, 2008

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    BEAUTIFUL POEM

    Dear Frans,
    I can sense how proud you are of these fine students. You have guided and taught them well. You are such a wonderful example for them to follow as they set out and search for their dreams. I know they will never forget the love and kindness you felt in your heart for them and how you worked to instill the values that are important in life along with the knowledge they will use to continue following their dreams. Thank you for sharing this wonderful part of your life with your friends here at allpoetry.

    May God Bless them in all they do and may they all find their dreams some day. And God bless you too Frans for being you. You are a blessing in so many lives. You touch so many and they pass that love and kindness on so it is never ending. *hug * Sandy



    They came to learn
    They listened well
    Now they all hear
    The toll of the bell
    It tolls for those
    Who did their best
    Now it is time to
    Follow life's quest
    You all bid farewell
    With love in your hearts
    The tears are of joy
    As their journey starts


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    November 21, 2008

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    Humm ...Summing up in few lines the depth of the relationship and the move and place of the life of the teacher and student is wonderfully stated in this poetry..My congrats to you sir and to your students ..And yes best wishes to all your students for their successful future..God blesses you and your students as well....


  • Aesthete2000 gold member
    November 21, 2008

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    Exposed to greatness
    as espoused by the teacher,
    each student leaves the flock
    as potential Dynamic leader.

    A year to treasure
    for group interaction,
    learning beyond measure
    life's satisfaction.

    Congratulations, Professor and students.

    M-C


  • R S Adams Jr silver member
    November 21, 2008

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    Great poetry.

    I have always been impressed with the person who aspires to be a scholar. Here eleven of you have achieved and reap the success you deserve from your year’s work. This poem is a dedication to that.

    When we first complete a study, sometimes we do not see the immediate benefit of our work. But, experience teaches me that you will see that benefit later, if not now. It takes time for the arrow to hit its target.

    Congratulations to you and all the best for the future. Dominus Vobiscum.


  • Melodies
    November 21, 2008

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    Impressive!

    You have accomplished a fine goal and will always remember what you did with pride. Thank you for setting an example of hard work and spirit.


  • myrataal silver member
    November 21, 2008

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    Privileged Par Perfection!

    If you will forgive me this Myra twist in English -- I shall translate this as: Bevoorreg Bowe Benede! THIS is how I feel to be part of this group -- for I am! For not only is Frans the most versatile, industrious, focused and endopathic mentor I know of, but that applies to each and every one in this group! Truly a dynamic unit of excellence.

    Beloved Professor and Students: I wish you a purposeful realization of dreams and the joy and beauty of holding stars on the palms of your hands, in sharing our Creator's Wonderment to all treading your path. Soli Deo Gloria!

    Thank you for all the excitement and happiness you shared with me, too. I shall never forget you.

    May God bless you and keep you, now and always.

    Love
    Myra


  • rite
    November 21, 2008

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    To get a grasp on the workings of life requires hard work. Everyone who has contributed to the positive advancement of human existence has committed himself / herself to making some type of effort. At the end of the journey may await praise or denial and sometimes miraculous finds, but in any case talent and persistence have been applied. Throughout history these properties have allowed mankind to progress. Being part of such a process is both a privilege and responsibility. I wish you and your groups of postgraduates a great and meaningful evening at the conclusion of the prelude of being a bachelor.


  • Nicolette gold member
    November 21, 2008

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    Wonderful, Frans! And congratulations to you and your students. I so understand how you feel and the "empty nest feeling". I remember when I finished my studies that I too felt that way, but I think much more so the lecturer and guide.

    Having been in the academic world myself I can share in you joy and theirs on a task well-accomplished and goals achieved. May the wind be at their backs and may they apply their acquired knowledge and skills to the best of their abilities.

    May you all soar to new heights!

    ~ Nicolette


  • Kathleen a Nazarene
    November 20, 2008

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    Future Fullfillment!

    Postgraduate studies with Professors Frans? Now that couldn't have been anything other than sheer joyful fun! I'm sure those eleven students who spent all those Fridays with you benefited greatly & will go on to be wonderful therapists! Helping people with their emotional needs can be very challenging, but also very rewarding. Way to go Papa Eagle! You've made those Eaglets ready to soar!

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