Just breathe.
Wake up! PLEASE!
I know you cant hear me,
but i need you
alive in my life.
Just breathe.
Come to me,
into my life once more.
Bring back the love,
revive all of my life.
I, will breathe for you.
Breathe, for your defects.
The illusions of your pain,
saying its who you are.
Breathe, for your selfishness.
Your illusions of self worth,
believing its your love.
Breathe, for your ignorance.
My illusion of self worth,
that suffocated your life.
I just breathe.
Breathe the reality,
that you are gone
and will not come back.
Breathe the illusion,
that you are dead
to me and my life.
Breathe handsome air
and remember that
life, will come back to me.
Author notes
i wrote to a friend about people not doing the right things in life to other people, i have used this as the basis for my poem.
A contest entry
- Reality vs. Illusions by Suicide Hotline.
700 points, ended December 28, 2008, 33 entries
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Comments
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hey
i kno what u mean -
I loved this idea on using some feeling into the words, it was great, and i understand what you mean by people like uoi and they mostly get hit, and yes, mostly i get hit aswell, thanks for the write!
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