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Santa Baby


Santa baby, is that your evergreen spice
that I smell coming from the tree
came a sultry, smokey voice from across the room

Santa turned around and his eyes flew open wide
for the lithe, tight bodied blond was sprawled out
in nothing but tinsel and a pretty pink bow
singing "Santa baby" in a sexy little voice

So what could he do but put down his sack
screw all the goodies for the kiddies
He sauntered on over to the hot little minx
and showed her HIS package for her

Her eyes grew wide with awe and glee
for it was bigger and better than she'd imagined
and as he untied her bow and did away with the tinsel
you could hear Rudolph holler, "Go, Santa, Go"

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  • Paloszoo gold member
    November 21, 2008

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    I'm partial to men with facial hair. Maybe your Santa will visit me this year! This was a cute write. Nicely done, you perv!


  • voodoo ink Greeters member
    November 21, 2008
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    Yeah, screw the kids, it's about time Santa got something more than milk and cookies...

  • dx d by me
    November 21, 2008
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    Rudolph the perv! This was fun to read.


  • Blueskywonder
    November 21, 2008

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    "Go Santa Go"

    I bet he lit her up like blackpool

    a very seductive write with good imagery drawing one into the erotic and deeply sensual content