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Balance


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palpitations

always under pressure

no time like the present to stop...

...exhale.




Author notes

7 letter B word...'Balance'

A contest entry

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  • delightfulmess silver member
    November 28, 2008

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    Yes... I loved this take.
    Balance is so important and you expressed the emotional side well.
    best of luck in the contest.


    Delila


  • The Fun House silver member
    November 22, 2008

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    I love it! You’ve taken this prompt and owned it. This speaks volumes in few words and lines; while making a solid and quite poetic impact on the reader. Take a bow you deserve to with this.