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Blue Dreams




A blue dream in hopes of a misunderstood inebriation;
sprouts the inner happiness to give a meaning to live,
she smiles unworried, devastation causes carelessness;
by leaving, breaking the ravaged hearts by ambiguities.

She dreams of love, friendship to achieve her destiny;
to forget side headstock, the sadness of a harlequin;
would like so much to know the soft madness of passion;
to fill her discomfort, to answer such hidden questions.

Kept in secrecy with profoundness of heart to discrete;
would like to discover an elixir of eternal unending youth,
to be able to appease her desires, to satisfy intoxication,
she, woman in confidence, daring muse at coast mystical.














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  • Sandygram silver member
    December 1, 2008

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    A wonderful take on the prompt. Great imagery to keep the reader's interest from beginning to end. Thank you for entering my contest and best of luck. Your poem was a pleasure to read this morning. Take care, Sandy