You long to take her warm hands in yours
Long to kiss her flawless skin and
Lips that look heavenly soft
You long to run your hands down her slim waist
Pull her close, hold her in an embrace
To feel her
Whisper words of love in her ear
Run your fingers through her cool, rich hair
Spilling from your grasp like crisp autumn leaves
Eyes like the sky, where she gets her name
Hair like honey, sweet and pure
She is amazing
Beautiful, funny, happy, caring
She knew of you, took your words to heart, and
Never flinched in fear
Never heated you for what you are
She knew that it's just YOU
You told her your feelings, and she smiled more
Accepted you openly, with arms of a friend
Never faltered once, never uncertain, unsure
She knows you, helps you, and tells you
"Be happy."
Your love for her is so deep and strong, that
You can't find the words, and your heart cries out
'Look at me, I'm right here
Wanting you, needing you, craving you and
Loving you'
You long for her to smile at you
The way she smiles at him
He strokes her hair, holds her, feels her and
Whispers softly in her ear
And you feel as if you heart might explode
When you see her blush and laugh at something that
He said
'What's in his touch that's not in mine?
Why is he special and I'm not?
Why does he make her warm inside, like a fire burning bright?
Why can't I hold her in my arms?
Does he love her like I do?
Oh girl I love who I call friend, what's in a boy
Not me?'
You'll always be a friend to her, and you doomed
To be in love, but by her side you'll surely stay
To make sure she's loved and safe
A fire bright with sorrow and pain may burn within your
Walls, but as her friend, you'll see it through
Until these feelings fade
Or are returned.
Author notes
Sorry if it sucks. You know, like bad stanzas, choppy flow, and poor use of words, not to mention no rhythm. I'm not exactly doing great right now, forgive me...
For (about) Skye.
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Wow! Okay, seriously, the emotion in this is like a slap in the face. In a good way, I just mean that it's really really instense. Great write. One of your best if we're purely speaking about emotion.
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Nice! Lots of emotion in the story, and really good word choice. I like the use of 'dhafljhdsfds'. Brilliant, again .
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Wow! This storyline... yeah, it got to me. Almost brought tears to my eyes! This is amazing sis! I love it! It might not have the best flow and rhythm, but it is good, nonetheless. This wonderful sis! And with whatever you're going through, I hope it works out soon. I don't want to see you in any kind of pain! I hope you get better soon!!! Love ya, sis!
♥Chelsea
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Thank you so much sis, for loving my work even when it sucks immensely. *laugh* I hope I get better soon too. The short version of this story line is that I fell in love with one of my best friends. She's straight of course, and has a boyfriend. Sigh. Well, I've told her pretty much everything and she still accepts me, which I couldn't ask for anything better, but...I still want more. Oh well. I only hope that these feelings fade eventually so that they won't cause her any more trouble. 
Once again, thank you for all your support!
~Hannah
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Awwww! Ha-cahn...this is beautiful. I can feel all your emotions in this. This poem is absolutely amazing!
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Thanks Amanda-chan.
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