Ravage me,
consummate me,
show me I'm worthy!
My body is your canvass
Paint me.
You alone
are master,
I am slave...
Enrapture me
with perpetual
decadence.
Punish me!
Author notes
Photography: Mick Payton. Title: Don't make me wait.
A contest entry
- 24 hours adults only, alright folks. . .here's one more for you. by JinSays.
400 points, ended November 22, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Wow dude, that was very crazy and the imagery in my head... scary, lol
Seriously, Iunno if you were intending these thoughts, lol
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Hmmmm. . . .wasn't thinking along these lines. I liked it up until the very last line. . .the punish me line just doesn't work for me. Not with this prompt.
I did like the poem however, and I thank you for entering and I wish you all the best.
jin -
Oh My Word~
Now that will get the person's attention in more ways than one
Powerful words and images- along with energy to grab the eyes to focus~
Magnificent take on the picture prompt!
Keep that quill dancing my Friend
Thank You for sharing Your Heat and Voice~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
Best wishes in the contest too
with much love & light~ Desire~*~
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A slave...what an exciting thought.
'Punish me!' ...very erotic, I love it!
All the best in the contest.
Annie
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well, there is a change in the air it seems.. not often do we see a man talking about a woman being the master.
well done
Juls
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