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Delight, (Cinquain)

Delight
all day, all night
keeping life fresh and bright
free from fright, no blight, gorgeous sight
My wife

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D word.Delight.

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  • Aren't you sweet!

    How delightful to read such a tender write about your wife. You must make her very happy! Thanks for this!


  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    November 21, 2008
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    aww...this is beautiful ...and nice rhyme in there...Good luck


  • The Fun House silver member
    November 21, 2008

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    So very romantic and just beautifully done. I think you've done an excellent job here both in form and creating a wonderful piece from your chosen word.


  • Janice M Pickett
    November 20, 2008
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    Cute. LOL Your wife must be a saint. LOL Good luck in the contest.