Was it really that hard?
Did you really need to go to those extremes?
[What decievery, Juliet.
Am I really that....
detestable?]
I defended you, Juliet.
[He killed your cousin.
Did you know that, Juliet?
Your cousin was angry, too.
Now Romeo murdered me.]
But life works in strange ways.
I loved you, Juliet.
[I did.
Really.
Truly.]
I see now...
Was it the thrill, Juliet?
The defiance?
The desire to prove something -
anything?
[Typical teens.]
But "true love" -
or forbidden love -
Makes for good stories.
[So I died -
Utterly,
Utterly
Alone.]
History morphs into unrecognizable
lies
(or truths?)
as well, Juliet.
... And so two starry eyed lovers
outwitted the interference
called Paris.
[I laugh.
Bitterly.]
It's tragic, isn't it?
[But what about me?
I loved you too, Juliet.
Did you know that?
Did you, Juliet?]
History calls it tragic.
[How I wish I could change it.
Maybe then I'd be worthy of your...
tainted love.]
Life calls it tragic.
[He murdered me, Juliet.
Do you care?
Do you, my sweet,
sweet Juliet?]
But me?
[I call my story...
tragic.]
Author notes
Ack. >.< That didn't really turn out how I wanted it to. 
Anyway, it's from Paris's POV. Incase people were confused.
For the contest - Butterflies OR caterpillars. I don't really care.
A contest entry
- Romeo and Juliet by my02U.
480 points, ended December 8, 2008, 12 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Not So Happily Ever After (Romeo And Juilet) by HereComesTheSun.
950 points, ended February 13, 31 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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AWSOME work! it really was pretty darn good and i would of never thought of doing it that way
great job
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Thanks for complimenting
I've always sympathized with Paris.
Thank you for hosting the contest!
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Dude I love it! Its amazing! Its like in Twilight no one cares about Jacob. Jacob/Paris Paris/Jacob???
Poor guys.
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Thanks for the comment Jacob is AWESOME. Haha, I always love those characters. I feel like them all to often
I'll have to read some of your poems
-Paradox
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beautiful
its really interesting how you look at the outsiders pov instead of romeo or juliet. very original and creative. the fresh outlook gives the story a sharp edge and makes juliet seem foolish and superficial.
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Thanks for your comment... I know it's about one month late. Oh well.
I've never had much patience for Juliet, and I've always liked the outsider... Hehe. In other words, I Iike to tear apart classics
-Paradox
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ha ha! luv ya, moronic ox - er, i mean paradOXical oxyMORON... lol. this is so you, yes, yes, very 3D (thanks sis) very nice, a very beautiful person must have edited this... now who could that have been... lol.
luv,
lovey
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Thanks
*gasps* How did you know who edited this??
-Paradox
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It's really good and I don't care what you say! So deal with it!!!! *laughs evilly*
I really like the end bit. The (whatcha-ma-callsists?) [ ] things were cool, they added a three demensional (can poems be 3D?) depth to the poem.
Good luck in the contest!
(wow...is my mind messed up right now...that comment makes no sense)
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No... it doesn't make sense.... but who does?
OH! Have a new favorite emoticonthingy - not
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How do you do that one? *face* *slap* *hand* hmmm...
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It's * facepalm * except without the spaces.
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oooooh!
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