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My Sister, Bonnie





She gave her life to the needs of others
“An angel” is what I heard them say
She was always the first to want to help
In her own and  very special way

She is gone now, away in the night
In Heaven as I think of her today
I hear some voices from above.
“An angel” is what I hear them say




Author notes

Lionheart---this is about my sister Bonnie who passed on at a young age.
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  • ourgirlFriday
    January 22
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    absolutely lovely!


  • allygirl87
    January 20
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    aww this was a very nice poem... thank you so much for entering
    good luck!


  • Crazy9Piano8Freak
    December 15, 2008

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    Short but sweet. It is extremely powerful and so I absolutely love it. This has just touched me so greatly. Fabulous job! Thank you and good luck!


  • dustytiger
    November 26, 2008

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    this is really sad, i cried, it's just so powerful, with such a short write, wow, best of luck in the contest


  • suseann
    November 21, 2008

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    Gees! I hope this isn't the sis I've a picture of you sitting with cheek to cheek . If so...I'm so... very sorry for your loss,but either way. You've penned a kiss of angels in tribute to her memory. They are devoted and to a fault though I know.

    • Lionheart
      November 21, 2008
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      Yes, this ts the Sister in that picture. I didn't know you saved that picture or any pics at all. My sister and my brother both died young and had rough lives.
      Thanks for you comment.

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