Dummies feel the heat of rain
Flowing into la isla's gain
Winter's salt suffers the fame
Often feeling
la temperate's game
Fathoming, coming
dummies of shame
La isla discovers
Te almora's true flame....
.................Te Quiro mi amor.............
In a list
A contest entry
- Pick a word - Write a Poem in 10 LINES or less (D) by The Fun House.
1050 points, ended November 28, 2008, 16 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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It's short but..for some reason, I like the mix of language in it. It seems to add more...mystic to it, if that makes sense. Lovely.
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Very random one, hard to understand but that's a good thing. I like confusion.
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great write...I like it
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I think you've misspelled "coming" but then again perhaps not since I am not versed in other languages besides english so if not I'm sorry. As for the poem it is wonderful. Beautiful flow and well done
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Yes, I fixed it. Sorry, I think I edited this thing so much it finally wouldn't let me go back and edit again once I finally saw and realized my mispelling, but ift fianlly has now.
Thanks you guys.
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