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Depression

Every time i get a little too depressed
I get out my pin and i do something horrible
I get out my pin and i carve in my skin
Sometimes words or sometimes just lines
Then i watch the flow of the ruby river
I watch it flow from the incision that i had made
After wards i feel so disappointed in myself
I feel so depressed
But the pain is never gone
I always feel the scars
The pain is never ever gone
I always have to see them
The scars every single day
Every time i get too depressed
I just get out my pin and carve something horrible
Into my skin

Could you feel the emotions of the poem? What did you think?

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  • KissMe123
    November 30, 2008
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    just to let anyone know i truthfully am tryin to stop i hate the feeling i get afterward its nothing to be proud of and i hate myself for it


  • Infectious Insanity
    November 22, 2008
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    erm. thats sad...


  • tellnotalesxx
    November 22, 2008

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    W0AHH STR0NG EM0Tii0NS!!! ii CAN T0TALLY UNDERSTAND WHAT Y0UR TRYiiNG T0 SAY iiN Y0UR P0EMMM!!! G00D J0BB!
    ^^) -MELiiJELii