Enigmatic elegance,
object of desire-
warm weather beach babe
in need of a fire.
Essence of uncertainty,
a man stands alone.
Seeking reason to believe-
but destination unknown.
Two separate journeys,
intersection ahead-
two different directions
or together instead?
Author notes
She knows who she is........
A contest entry
- What Are You Feeling? by Simone Brooklyn.
1050 points, ended November 25, 2008, 33 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I love the flow to this. Its awesome.
The last lines are fantastic....
Good luck at that intersection, I hope your brave enough to throw away that map and go for it....change directions for that warm weather beach babe....sounds like you want to, and lifes too short not to.
Great write!
Jamie
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THIS IS GREAT!! I loved this, it flowed perfectly, and sent a great message as well. Well done, and good luck in my contest.
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