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Rustynite





Random Thoughts philosophical meanderings
Under no illusions just living life
Seer of wisdom, smiling jethro questions
True to his own values beliefs’ held fast
Yearning to seek truth through His love
Notebooks of words, lines on a page
Integrity and honesty guiding his path
Trademark smile willingly shared
Essentially comfortable this man, a poet, my dear friend.


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Toni sorry my computer went belly up on me . Please same request not to be considered for judging.

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  • Sandra R Reynolds gold member
    February 25
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    Great write.


  • penman gold member
    January 23
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    wonderful

    Such touching words. So very well done as always. Congratulations on the honorable mention.


  • stavykm gold member
    November 25, 2008

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    Very Moving

    What a beautiful tribute to a special friend and poet. I'm so sorry for your loss. He sounds like he was just a wonderful man. It is so beautiful that you give him your honor, love and respect in this beautiful piece of poetry. Thank you for sharing with me. Best wishes in the contest.

    Blessings Always
    Much Love
    Kelle Marie


  • Desire gold member
    November 24, 2008

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    Another Precious Offering~

    Oh My Word this is a Beauty along with the other Gem penned
    I felt an urging to click on the contest posting and noticed this verse as well
    Love the Acrostic~ also touches deep- personal
    I'm Honored to read~ Thank You for sharing this man with us~ also my eyes are unable to stay dry...
    Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet One
    Best wishes in the contest too
    with much love & light~ Desire~*~


  • Talking Toni gold member
    November 23, 2008

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    Great Acrostic!!!!!

    All these characteristics you write of were completely David...He held fast and strong to his beliefs he loved God with a passion...Did not let his past hold him back accepting God's complete forgiveness and restoration of his life and dignity, with which he passed through the corridors of heaven with.....Thanks for sharing but as I told the other entrant, this is what the contest is for those who REALLY knew David and want to honor his life and the friendship they had with here at All Poetry!!! Thanks for the lovely entry!!!~~~Toni~~~


  • lostangel07
    November 22, 2008

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    I didn't even notice it was an acrostic until I looked back through it. A lovely heartfelt piece dedicated to an exceptional poet


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    November 21, 2008

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    Very warm and deeply heartfelt tribute to a wonderful person and friend. I know he smiled upon you as he read this. Friends are so special and I know how hard it is to lose one. But, they live on in our hearts. Beautiful write my dear friend.


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    November 21, 2008

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    What a wonderful dedication to a poet who will be sadly missed by so many!
    Thank you for writing and sharing.
    Gaylene


  • Rose Angel gold member
    November 21, 2008

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    Oh Wow...What an acrostic, dear friend..From what I knew of the dear poet, he was all you reflected on in your write! I am so saddened that this vital part of your life and others has gone...May it be stored forever within your heart...So glad I read it tonight!


  • Quiet places
    November 20, 2008
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    Excellent

    A wonderful tribute to Rustynite. Great writing hun. Don

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