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Dreamer

Golden leaves rain with red,
carpet laid to rest your soul
lay my love, be mine to hold.

Meadow by the stream,
cast your pain away I say,
dream my dreamer dream.







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  • arafura gold member
    November 21, 2008
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    This is one of your very best! I really felt every word of this. Lovely!


  • The Fun House silver member
    November 21, 2008

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    Ah, such a classic feel to this piece and just beautifully done. I like that is has so much to say in few words.