Riddles and metaphors surround
Our conversation's true reason
Unspoken truths lie underground
We are guilty of this treason
Because it can't be our season
We must stay cowards to refrain
Mistakes that can not be undone
So to these chains we shall remain
A contest entry
- Pick a word - Write a Poem in 10 LINES or less (C) by The Fun House.
1050 points, ended December 14, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think?
Comments
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This is very good! I had to read it twice.
Very well written. Good luck in the contest!
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Humm..this is really a thought provoking piece you have shared while describing the story of the life in every word of this great poetry..very touching piece..well said...
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This is actually very well done. It gives one something to ponder and it makes you want to ponder it since it is written with a strong conviction. Excellent vocabulary throughout this piece.
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wow this is amazing. i really really loved this.
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