I see his golden eyes
Fade to black over time
It's a danger just to reach over
And take his hand in mine
I express how much I need him
But he just pulls further away
I know he feels the same way too
He's just too scared to say
I age with every breath I breathe
With every step I take
But he will stay forever young
Forever awake
I wrap my arms around him
And expect a warm embrace
But all I feel are his icy-cold
Arms around my waist
This love of mine, this unhealthy obsession
I just can't live wihtout
If I were to lose him, my soul would break
This I know without a doubt
Author notes
I couldn't think of a title, any suggestions?
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Comments
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aww ammazing! it so decribes bellas n edwards love really well!
"I express how much I need him
But he just pulls further away
I know he feels the same way too
He's just too scared to say"
aww sweet
great write
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This is amazing!
It describes Twilight so well.
Great job!
xD -
I love it!
You captured twilight in a poetic form.
I don't know what to title it though
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