I bestowed upon them integrity
with silent reverie, bemused now
I em-bow inside myself as if to hide
They gazed upon my efflorescence
with amusement in their visage
I collapsed heavier still...
the death of my blossom
A contest entry
- Pick a word - Write a poem in 10 lines or less (B) by The Fun House.
1050 points, ended December 14, 2008, 19 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Word used....Blossom
Comments
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congrats on the silver! Happy Holidays.


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This is both captivating and alluring. I found it to be a very strong piece and beautiful to read aloud. You should take a bow for this one because this is poetry at its finest. Fantastic!


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Such beauty in your words. I'm captivated again with your brilliance and talent. BRAVO!!


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Blossom dear.
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OMG. I'm an idiot. I thought this was for the "D" contest.
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