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Death of My Blossom


I bestowed upon them integrity
with silent reverie, bemused now
I em-bow inside myself as if to hide

They gazed upon my efflorescence
with amusement in their visage
I collapsed heavier still...

the death of my blossom

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Word used....Blossom

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  • ea silver member
    December 15, 2008
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    congrats on the silver! Happy Holidays.


  • The Fun House silver member
    November 22, 2008

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    This is both captivating and alluring. I found it to be a very strong piece and beautiful to read aloud. You should take a bow for this one because this is poetry at its finest. Fantastic!


  • Paloszoo gold member
    November 21, 2008

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    Such beauty in your words. I'm captivated again with your brilliance and talent. BRAVO!!

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