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Disapointment lingering in the Air!

Tired…
Disappointed…
Careless and no feeling left…
You took everything when you left…
You took my soul and my reason to live…
Our love may be true but it doesn’t mean that it’s healthy..
Doesn’t mean that it’s meant to be…
Numb is the best description…
Building a wall that will not come down that easily…
You had my heart and you took it for granted..
It’s my turn to say fuck…
Fuck this relationship…
Fuck you…
Don’t come all soft spoken because it’s not going to do you any good…
Forgive, I can’t…
Each day that passes you loose merit points in my consideration…
Go, just go…
When I wanted you to look, you didn’t…
Now that you want it, I want you to disappear and vanish for good…
I deserve better… I deserved your complete attention…
Maybe it’s my fault…
Maybe I said something wrong…
Maybe I did something wrong…
Just can’t figure it out….
Tell me what I did wrong…
No, you are so self -absorbed that you can’t see beyond your own world…
You couldn’t even see that you were hurting me…
I don’t hate you…
I don’t love you…
No regrets, just disappointment lingering in the air…

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