i must admit
i have been a pain sometimes
but to deserve something so horrid
is
regretful
i never meant to hurt anyone
i just needed food thats all
i didnt intend to be a criminal
but things happen
and.....
maybe i deserve to die
but not he
he didn't deserve
any of this
im a criminal
ill admit
but hes the savior
A contest entry
- Tell me a story about the 2 men on the cross beside Jesus by trekkergirl.
550 points, ended November 22, 2008, 8 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Thank you very much for doing what I asked. I asked for a story about one of the two people who died on the crosses beside Jesus. You did this. I appreciate you following the rules. This is a well written poem and I can see someone coming to terms with the ending of their life doing just this. Thanks for entering into my contest.
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sorry about the writing of only one of the criminals
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