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Loss haiku

An earthquake killed four
A young family, but no more
There, the music died

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  • ChunkyC
    November 20, 2008

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    Holy. Wow this is powerful for not but fourteen words. Oh my geez. The image that is left to the mind, that this picture and text create so well together. I'm in awe! I wish I could write something so short and spread a wonderful picture. I'm impressed, great job, and great form! Thanks for entering and good luck!


  • Celtic Legend
    November 20, 2008

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    wow wow wow! what an amazing haiku! sad about the pic though, probably because i play piano. oh well. Nice Job! good luck!