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Servitude




Instructions in her dream were very clear
She had to find the magic stretch of beach
Remove her clothes and wash away her fear
And everlasting love was in her reach

She strips and sees a parting of the waves
A golden castle rising from the sea
She's off to join the wizard's band of slaves
The beauties who are tired of living free

The under water causeway to the door
Will lead her to her life of perfect bliss
Orgasmic trance is hers for evermore
As soon as she surrenders to the kiss

If you desire a slave's eternal life
Then join me in my castle as a wife

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  • ennovy silver member
    November 21, 2008

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    An most beautiful sonnet telling a lovely tale.....thank you for entering our contest...Novy & Brazos


  • Sue Cardwell gold member
    November 21, 2008
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    A not bad take on the prompt...all the best