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A Wish

An apple falling from a tree,
wishes only to see a different world,
than the one among the leaves,
a dove floating through the sky,
revels in the ability,
to shed its earthen ties,
and a heart racing in a flutter,
yearns for the privelege,
to beat next to another.

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  • Disturbed Prodigy
    November 20, 2008

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    i like the meaning in this poem, it is something strong my friend, keep it flowing, hope to see more from you