An artist with a pen
And only words to kill
*needs a poem to go along*
From the depth
Of my mind
Comes twisted words
Like twisted twine
*entered in a contest, but its to short*
Dark as day
Dark as night
A never ending slumber
*is in a song, but could be so much better*
I wanna be free
I wanna dream
I wanna go far on silver light wings
*in a song again could be so much better*
It is destiny that I end like this
An unmarked grave
In the sea of darkness
*a good line that needs a good poem
Stain the paper
With tears from a pen
*could be longer and amazinger*
Whispers on the midnight still air
Call my name like I was there
*amazing line but needs an amazing poem to go along*
Author notes
more to come and i know it you know it we all know, but right now i need a little help anyone who does if the poem gets on here will be on the collaborated with list if they wish and if it gos in the book that is soon to be published will be in the THANKS FOR THE HELP PART of the book is they wish
SO GET TO WORK I NEED SOME HELP
i have not been able to write for awhile so im rusty if its bad tell me
Comments
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I feel you are on the right course with this poem
other than reading it over out loud and a touch up here and there
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IT IS VERY BAS!!!!
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~naw i'm just messing wit you i like it its very good and creative
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